Some people think that individuals are born to be leaders, others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is sometimes argued whether leadership could be achieved by learning or it naturally comes from the special ability of individuals. In my opinion, I believe that learning is the key for a person to become a true leader.
On the one hand, only a minority of people is born with leadership qualities. Most of these people are either born in a high-class family with perfect educational background or truly geniuses at birth. Either way, this type of remarkable leaders is significantly rare that can only be found in decades. For example, George Washington, the first president and also founding father of the United States of America, was born and raised in a wealthy family in which his parents were well-known intellectualists at the time. Due to such rareness, these birth-gifted leaders will not be expected to magically appear every several years.
On the other hand, studying and practicing can definitely turn an ordinary person into an extraordinary leader. Firstly, by learning, people can build up their characters and essential skills required for the leading jobs. Such qualities can be easily found in those who work and learn hard every day with determination. Secondly, unlike the gifted, the number of leaders who earn such title with their own efforts are not limited. In fact, there are an uncountable number of successful CEOs such as Mark Zuckerberg, Jeff Bezos and Warren Buffet, which proves leadership is actually achievable through learning.
In conclusion, I believe not all leaders are born gifted but that title is earned by hard work and studying though time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13409961686 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83202156573 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616858237548 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3052476361 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183786155951 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652203480579 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337210395739 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10572242661 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271683321936 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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