The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
We always have heard about many great people who have achieved success in their life. In other words, each and every individual let it be a small child or an elder person all have certain goals in their life, but there are very few people who try to achieve them. In my view we should never give up on our dreams because wherever we go we always have to struggle to learn and grow just giving up would not work.
Achieving goal is not a task which you can acquire in one single day, instead it is a positive step which are taken one after another even though you fail you always should have great determination toward the dream which you think to achieve. This can be explained with an example like we all are aware about the most popular restaurant owner COLONEL HARLAND SANDEER, an entrepreneur who has come across many failures in his life for various different reason but he never gave up. He was not only expelled from his job but also was removed from his family. Even after going through this much at the age of sixty he thought of starting a business for selling Fried chicken at roadside an after that you can see he is the person who is having a big restaurant name KFC, so from this we come to know whatever it may be when there is a will, there is always a way.
Secondly, the determination and the attitude which you carry can always make a major difference. For Instance, When I was searching for job I was not always confident so whenever I use to express my thought in front of interviewer there was some sort of conciseness which form a major barrier to get job even though I had good command over the subject, but there were many people who don’t even have that much knowledge about the subject still they manage to be confident and that’s the reason they got job. However, that is why differences in the attitude also makes major difference.
So Always be ready for each and every situation in your life without giving up. Because, it may happen you will fail multiple times but wherever you will be, you will always be standing one step ahead than what you are today. Always have positive though and approach towards things you perform so as to help yourself to achieve great heights of success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... was not always confident so whenever I use to express my thought in front of inter...
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Line 4, column 4, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: Be Always
...titude also makes major difference. So Always be ready for each and every situation in y...
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Line 4, column 294, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...and approach towards things you perform so as to help yourself to achieve great heights ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for instance, sort of, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 408.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47303921569 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29712048949 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526960784314 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.60203393 48.9658058833 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.384615385 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3846153846 20.6045352989 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155460246293 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528191024356 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486823260139 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904309012665 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109123933938 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 58.1214874552 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.24 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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