The line graph below gives information on cinema attendance in the UK.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
The graph below indicates the proportion of cinema attendance in the UK between 1990 and 2010 at the aged 14 to 54 is divided into four different groups.
Overall, it is clear that all age groups had the same upward trend except for a lightly decrease between 1995 and 2000 and the age group from 44 to 54 have highest proportion of cinema attendance in UK.
First of all, the age group had had the lowest percentage of people go to the cinema was from 14 to 24 (15% in 1990 and rose to 21% in 2010). People between the age from 24 to 34 had a slightly increase of 10% for 20 years. In 1990, the age group 34-44 and 44-54 had the nearly equal proportion but in 2010 the age group 44-54 have higher proportion ( about 8%)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('lightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...ps had the same upward trend except for a lightly decrease between 1995 and 2000 and the age group...
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Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
...nd 2000 and the age group from 44 to 54 have highest proportion of cinema attendance in UK. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
...nce in UK. First of all, the age group had had the lowest percentage of people go to t...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
...eople between the age from 24 to 34 had a slightly increase of 10% for 20 years. In 1990, the age g...
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Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e age group 44-54 have higher proportion about 8%
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p 44-54 have higher proportion about 8%
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, except for, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 581.0 965.302439024 60% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17985611511 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20920715245 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 161.1 283.868780488 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.7298334621 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.2 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901681764793 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624335105525 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568015322418 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919775754523 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546815238688 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.91 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.26 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 40.7170731707 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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