Dear Igor,
I hope that the letter reaches you well within the time before you leave for Delhi. I was apprised by our HR Manager that you are moving here and I remember you telling me sometime back that you never look for a house from a different city unless you reach the place itself. I have amazing news to share with you. Allow me to elaborate.
I would like to inform you that I have been transferred to Gurgaon office of the company and as such it is not viable for me to commute daily as such I decided to lease an apartment close to the office to save some extra bucks and get the maximum sleep hours possible.
I couldn’t stop thinking of your appreciation of my apartment when I decided to move. Let me refresh your memory with some new details about the apartment which you fell in love with. The apartment has recently been renovated and has a swanky new bathroom with new faucets and accessories. Further, I am sure that it will be bliss for a person who decides to stay here once I vacate.
Furthermore, I have held rounds of talk with the agent and convinced him to hold on with the process of leasing out the apartment to a new person for a little while as I apprised him about the love that you have for this apartment. I feel that the apartment will be a perfect fit for you considering you have already stayed here and it is a fully furnished apartment. Moreover, you are in walking distance from the office in a posh colony with modern and swankier interiors. I am sending you the business card of the agent for you to contact.
I hope you land with the same apartment and soon invite me over to your new bachelor pad.
Best Wishes,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...city unless you reach the place itself. I have amazing news to share with you. A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 314.0 206.0 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37898089172 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40186725001 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531847133758 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 290.88556701 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4649464243 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192066430343 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069298898604 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616964956662 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111535064593 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560538534195 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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