Many Offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishments. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problems.
A large number of criminals who have previously served prison terms still commit crime when they get freedom. This mainly because they lack proper rehabilitation and also find it difficult to get gainful employement when released. There are number of solutions that can be implemented to deal with criminals who reoffended.
First and Formost, One of the reason why criminal recommit crime when they are released is that is lack of rehabilitation while in prison. In other word, offender are not given the opportunity to learn new skills, better way of life that can be useful to them in the future. Anothet reason, is that they find it unease to get a good job, due to the fact that they lack employability skills. Umployement can led them to commit crime because there are financially i capacitated and lack means of livelihood.
There are some effective solution that can be deploy to tackle this trend. One way of solving reoffended criminal i s training them while in prison. This can be done by empowering them with useful skills such as beadmaking, Fashion designer and catering to mention few. In doing so, it will give them the skill needed to be used to reintegrate with the society when they are out of prison and give them finacial support. Another solution is close monitoring of free man so that they will not engage in immoral activities. This can be implemented by organising regular seminars that will remind that what led them to imprison, Also to incurcate good way of life.
To conclude, having equipped them while in prison and also closely monitoring of criminals when they are realeased are effective measures in dealing with this issue. If the state implement this solutions crime rate will reduce drastically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93197278912 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6906976353 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517006802721 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
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Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
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Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812553129048 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058750824724 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132977984156 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133376798614 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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