some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means other believe that these games are contributing to children development. discuss both view and give your opinion?
" kids activities have been shifted from outdoor to room , specifically the screen " . One of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic whether the role of electronic games for children ; bad or not ? In this essay , I am going to examine the questions from both points of views .
On one side of the argument , there are people who believe that computer games are not best for children by all means . The main reason for believing this is that now days, juveniles spent most of the time in front of cellphones , computers , laptop , and soo on .It put them adversely affected on successors health to , like eyesight week , and also increase the obesity level because they do not have to participate in any kind of the physical activities . The best epitome is that the survey conducted by " The High School" in Delhi , 90% of children are not participated in the outdoor activities , just behind the reason is that they like to play computer games .
On the flip side , there are antagonists to this assertion who believe that electronic games are contributing to young one's development . They bolster their view point by claiming that electronic games sharpen the memory of juveniles and they learn the lesson of multi-tasking because some children have a habit to perform different task in some minutes as 'what ever is good to know is difficult to learn ' but children can every difficult work because they are performing multi-tasking very easily .So , computer games have best for children development .
Nevertheless , weighting both the option , I believe that there is no single conclusion still ,I take this ground one effective clap require the use both of hands as so , It is important for the overall development for the children study as well as children play video games in the limit .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95409836066 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73690051447 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.970864806 49.4020404114 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.888888889 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8888888889 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 68.0 5.01903807615 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335291938934 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145825786778 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105051555347 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198725373152 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312453756514 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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