It is thought by most of the people that social networking sites like facebook, whatsapp, google+ etc are having serious negative impact in person and society. In my opinion, i think that though web based technologies have negative impact on local communities and society the positive side of social networking should not be neglected.
Firstly, it helps people all over the world to connect together which has never happened before at the cheap cost. the groups in social media allows people having same taste and thoughts to get to know about each other and sometimes even helps in people to find their soulmates. It allows family members and friends to be in touch and know each other status by updates and news feed. Recently the unusual issues happened society are well spoken out in social media which had made the authority to take action on victims. Their are many advantages that social media is providing to people at lower costs.
however, It is having negative impact on local communities and the society around us. especially the youth is getting attractive to this which is leading them to spend the most of their time in social media which in turn ignores the people surrounded by. It also impacts their physical and mental health which also impacts on their parents. It is fragmenting the bond between people and allowing people to get closer with the people online who are never going to meet and are even been betrayed by people. It is ultimately increasing the distance between people surrounded by. Even when we are with friends or family if we keep on using mobile phones it feels them ignored which will effect the bond between people.
To conclude, While the web based technologies have negative impact on the local communities it benefits individuals in personal. It will be better if local communities conduct some programs to make people interact with each other and be away from phones at least for some amount of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, while, at least, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90361445783 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38914477878 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509036144578 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9946027585 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229055277521 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819242507059 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660998552496 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145575554726 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673037761907 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.