In today's era, era of colossal development various profesions such as medical, engineering, business and many more are earning good amount of money. But on the contrary, victorious sports professionals earn more money than others. It has been argued by some people that this is not rationale with other proffesionals while other think that it is justified. In my perspective, every occupational should get great earning. Here, I would like to endorse my views on both the statements.
There are manifold points to support the view point that every important proffesion should get equal and high amount as this will mitigate the discrimination amonth them. Moreover, every line of employment has its own importance for example, doctor save life of patient with experience and various techniques, engineers construct the building for several purposes, architecturers build great highways, scientists invent new technologies. These lines has big role in the development of the country and they should be paid good too. Adding to it, every occupation serves for the society and for society people, to make them live effortlessly with good facilities either it is about health, education or marketing.
On the other hand, some people think that it is worth instead of unfair that sports professionals obtain great deal of money.
As they achieve great goals nd medals for their nation which not only make his or her parents proud but also proud their state. For example, Renaldo, Sachin Tendulkar, PT Usha, Milkha Singh and many more other who increased the pride of their country. Furthermore, it not only helo to built the economy but also built the great relationships among different countries.
In a conclusion, each and every proffesion has its own importance and every one should be paid for their harwork hence,this will be well justified for everyone.
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- Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
- Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person's nature. Discuss and give your opinion. 78
- A cursory discussion about advantages and disadvantages of domestic product 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24080267559 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82176749318 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612040133779 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.01986473 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262190135875 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968725880366 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118496366917 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175205023584 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15382847981 0.056905535591 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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