There have been many great inventions in the last 100 years, such as antibiotics, airplanes, and computers. I believe antibiotics and airplanes were a great invention but the computer is the most important invention. This essay will further elaborate reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
To begin with, It can be said that antibiotics and airplanes are a great invention but if we look closely it can be said that computers had a great contribution towards those inventions. For example, Airplanes totally relay on the computer for its decision, like lending, takeoff, and autopilot. Same way computer helped scientist in research for antibiotics finding.
Moreover, Computer has helped human in all aspects of life and has made life easy. For Example, Students can now use the computer for their research, and housewives can use the computer to do the shopping online. This has really affected the human life very positively, which proves the computers to be the best inventions of the past 100 years.
In conclusion, it can be clearly said that, despite the antibiotics, and airplanes had made human life easy and secure, but the contribution of computer invention in those finding cannot be ruled out. hence, it is clear that the computer has brought the revolution in human life and is the most important invention from the past 100 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10572687225 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77922249988 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 139.433497537 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528634361233 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.931034482759 537% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8177447527 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.363636364 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.25397266985 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256862878359 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118866320281 0.0925447433944 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126410984795 0.071462118173 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172385333198 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782068291407 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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