The world is experiencing dramatic increase in population this is causing problems only not for poor undwenveloped nations but salso for industrialised and developing nations describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes and suggest at least one possible solutions
it is undoubtedly the case that overpopulation which is major problem causing problems for; developed, under developing, and poor people which is affecting the society adversely. In this essay it will examine the possible reasons for this phenomenon and suggest some effective measures that authorities could implement to reduce the effects of population burst.
The first step is to understand why present a dramatic increase is in populace. Broadly speaking this is causing problems for the society. Firstly it has resulted in scarcity of food in some regions, as population is constantly increasing. As a consequence, it becomes hard for government in undeveloped countries to provide food and work to each and every individual. the best epitome of its can be india which is one of the overpopulated nations where majority of denizens are not getting even a meal in area day , and some highly educated people are unemployed due to the; overpopulation. Consequently, the massive rise in population is also responsible for natural imbalance. Because to provide accommodation for rank and file trees and forests are being cut down on large scale in order to build houses.
here is almost certainly no one solution to the problem given the complexity of its causes. Although, one thing can be done to make public aware of this; government should make people aware about the consequences of increased population by educating them. Moreover, either people must be introduced about family planning programme or laws should be implemented for parents to have no more than two children. British countries are good quintessence of this where government has control on population growth due to such rules and regulations.
To elucidate, there are some solutions given for this problem. Although, I believe that government should make some effective measures to abate the population in order to avoid it's harmful effects on society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, moreover, so, broadly speaking
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27361563518 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99225084238 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0513722802 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.933333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299964030629 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103870229504 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833834471505 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189617327572 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709661032969 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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