Some people have great ambitions in life, others don’t. Do you think ambition is important to succeed in life? Is it a positive or a negative quality to have?
Ambition is a key to achieve life goals but not necessarily everyone has an aim. Personally, I believe that it helps people to fulfill their dreams and become successful and prosperous. It’s a fact that aiming in life is a positive quality to be determined but let’s see the flip side too.
To have an aspiration in life gives motivation to the people to achieve their targets. It helps them to make plan, set their goals, work hard so that they can fulfill their dreams. An ambitious person gets rid of his bad habits and distractions in his life. A person’s desire always helps him to be self-disciplined and make himself to solve most of the problems with complete will power. He always remains focused towards his dreams. For example, a person who is ambitious to become a doctor will always perform well with full of passion and hard work in his life.
At the flip side, unreasonable ambition in life of a person can lead bad results in life. For example, if a person has big ambition but less talent who cannot achieve within his extent so they lead astray, therefore they probably harm someone for their desired aim. Similarly, to become over ambitious is also a big concern where people with such condition when failed due to any reasons or circumstances so they start feeling humiliated which can coerce them to put their life on stake or take wrong decisions.
To recapitulate, become ambitious is not a piece of cake for everyone so it should be determined according to inner caliber, interest, commitments and circumstances to get the best out of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79927007299 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75761989276 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8624429044 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.153846154 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179782908545 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743863328781 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717769892664 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109569554459 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769921457643 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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