Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools, especially at the preschool level. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
Teaching music in preschool has been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of music in kindergarten through multiple modes of communication be it main stream media or be it the social media. Below in easy of mine I will try to enunciate that music is important to start at early ages with some examples.
The most prominent reason is that when a child start his school life than it is very important for him to adjust in the school life. In addition, if in the school they will learn all the core subjects than they might get bored and will find out more examples to avoid the school.Moreover, if they learn music in school than, they will love to go to school everyday and enjoy more with their peers.
Continuing to this, if a child has some problem in learning numbers, alphabets than a teacher can teach him through music. Furthermore, when children introduced to music as a subject at early age, they develop a positive attitude towards life and enjoy their learning phase.
While on the other hand, there are people who will continue to wrangling about the facts that music should teach at early age or not. I would like to conclude that learning music at younger age can help children to learn all the subjects with positive attitude.
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60378974281 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558704453441 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0041150499 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.888888889 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.9669160288 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140241999932 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069500812138 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366759852995 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950542446731 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350898063112 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.5310837438 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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