It is as important for school children to study music, art, and sport as it is for them to become literate and numerate.’ How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
Recently, the phenomenon of studying sports, arts and music and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by numerous that the matter of its importance is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both positive and constructive by a substantial number of individuals. I reckon that learning such subjects can be plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, when a student learns sports, music or art, he feels more confident and capable to understand the concept effectively as a result of strong mental health. Moreover, learning sports help to improve physical health significantly. In addition to this, these activities also help to balance out the study pressure and transform learning as interesting and enjoyable doing. For example, if students study these activities during extra hours, despite getting a lower grade in education they can choose their career in the sports or music sector. Which further feels them with enthusiasm and prepare them to work hard and discover their potential.
On the flip side, parents need to be financially strong in order to prove such classes to their children. However, learning risky sports can bring to serious health injuries. So it is recommended to practice under the supervision of an experienced tutor. For instance, learning bungee-jumping or skydiving needs proper attention to avoid any serious damage.
To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both the sides, I profoundly believe that merits of expertise in such areas have enormous benefits to the society and to the individuals, which encourage the students to follow their passion. So, the merits of studying these subjects which helps them to settle their career outweigh its demerits. Thus, the positive aspects of this should be considered.
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- people emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new roads for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree? 77
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- It is as important for school children to study music, art, and sport as it is for them to become literate and numerate.’ How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience. 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40138408304 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86644734751 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3197384595 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.066666667 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131613846551 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409926869585 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284501540362 0.071462118173 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713594442494 0.151781067708 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394013926451 0.0609392437508 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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