In today's era, era of colossal development technology has spread its wings in the unit of mobile phones. As there are several types of phones made by so many companies like samsung, apple, nokia, lenovo which give us various advantages. While some people think believe that mobile phones should be banned. In my perspective, I do not advocate the given statement that phonea should be barred.
Lets delve deeper to discuss the reasons.
First and the foremost reason that why phones should not be curbed is that mobile phones mitigate the distances between two people sitting at far away from each other as one can easily communicate with his or her children, colleagues, parents, teachers, boss and to many more, hence communication gap reduces. Moreover, nowadays various works like shopping, food ordering have become so common, that is only possible with the helo of phones,which made the people's life easier.
Secondly, mobile give us so many information regarding weather, breaking news, business statistics, marketing. Thirdly, it is also a source of entertainment one can listen to songs, watch videos, play games. For instance, there are so many different applications in mobile phone like YouTube on which we not only watch the forma of videos but also upload ours and can get famous, also there are other applications like social sitea, mailing sites etc. Fourthly, coupled with Internet it provide us information regarding studiea,business and so on.
In a conclusion, mobile phones should not be barred because it is one of the common and important thing in one's life, even one cannot even survive in today's colossal world without it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17100371747 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69148062173 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650557620818 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8854218067 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.916666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254638438469 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890702289395 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870275484482 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125445630109 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0843864493324 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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