In the past when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country .Now a days, they have more opportunities to study abroad.What are the advantages and disadvantages to study abroad.
Undoubtedly, most of the students completed their education in their country in the earlier time however, in the present scenario,there have great deal of options to study for foreign countries. I believe that this is a positive as well as negative development.
On the one side there have a number of benefits for studies to abroad. Firstly, children become to a self dependent when they go to another country. As most of the students always depending on their parents and do not capable for the fullfill all needs whereas, when they go to another country they know about each and every thing manage by them. Secondly, they learn more skills about the culture of different countries which they go.They meet with various people and share their thoughts and get them ideas.Meanwhile, the dressing scene also included because it gives deep impact on individuals.
On the another side, this development has lot of drawbacks First of all, home sickness is a highlighted issue because in the another country a child does not share their emotions with others because some matters only discuss with their family members. Second of all, the cost of the apartment is very high not only cost but also tution fess of the universities. Anybody do not pay to fees in a easy way, some parents take a huge burden and then deposit the fees.For example, in Canada, there have a 300 to 500 dollars monthly fee.
According to my perception, ther have a significant amount of advantages while, it can not be neglected the other disadvantages of this growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, while, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88167938931 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70832390153 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5180716549 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.9 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251031390716 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900958323976 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738026440552 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130766024565 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882289293543 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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