Some people think that self defence classes should be provided to girls.To what extent you agree or disagree.
It is certainly true that, most of the masses opine that, women are interduce through the category of self mechanism. However, strongly believe that this training must be given to the females.
To begin with some benefits why it is necessary. Firstly, protection of theirself by the given of self defence training. As, at this present scenario, most of the women lived in the male dominated society and continuesly do compromise with the decision of men however, if girls took the training then they eaisly face to boys and demolished all typesof instructions which are started by them.For example, the survey conducted by the Indian government in last year their are above one lakh rapist cases are showed the data whereas, if each lady learn about the protection of theirself so reducing the number of cases.
Secondly, this is a copious way to encourage other women. Definitely, every one want to take some efforts in a effective way for their life but sometimes due to the circumstances and under the pressure of others broken their confidence on the other hand, if have they seen to others who had already prepared then the thinking of among women are increase for doing something. Those ladies are represented as a role models for them.
According to my perception, classification of self mechanism is a powerful method which help to girls, for living a relaxed life without any pressure and fear.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94514767932 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67914215796 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64135021097 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.628600556 49.4020404114 293% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.222222222 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0781652077592 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376083420333 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332080767784 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478216991111 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118151794729 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.