Culture shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants, what are the possible options to eradicate this issue?
Cultural shock occurs when a person moves to a foreign country with a completely different culture and traditions. People face ample of problems related to different aspects such as food, clothing, communication etcetera. Though it is an extremely unpropitious situation for people, but it can be resolved by taking proper measures and methods.
To commence, moving to a foreign country for a better future has become a notion among the youngsters, mostly of under developed countries. People migrating to another region commonly face problem in adjusting according to the new culture. As an illustration, if a vegan individual moves to a country where there is less availability of vegetables as compared to non-vegetarian then it becomes rigorously hard for him to survive in such conditions. As a result, they become isolated and feel stressed-out always which may lead to depression.
However, this problem can be coped with radical steps such as a person should communicate with the locality of that are so that one does not feel stranded. Moreover, if that person is migrating to coastal area and is a vegetarian then he must prepare himself mentally for the change in food varieties, and should also garner information about lifestyle of that particular area through distinct resources such as internet and books. Therefore, by following this method he will be less likely to fall prey to cultural shock.
In conclusion, immigrants should prior be ready for the upcoming changes, and should also endeavor to adopt the novelty culture which will be beneficial for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'move'?
Suggestion: move
... an illustration, if a vegan individual moves to a country where there is less availa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24015748031 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94406332048 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614173228346 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0672981318 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126020253667 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482279170504 0.0925447433944 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411947769257 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774817660372 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157760289282 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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