In the recent time of technological development, everything has been developed except rural areas which are still underdeveloped and no proper facilities are available there as compared to urban cities which are urban by every way. Through this essay, I shall explain the advantages of urban cities and obstacles faced by the rural people along with some of its proactive measures.
To start with, urban cities are running steadily by each and every aspect, comparatively backward areas. Indeed, it is possible to say that big cities provide the job opportunities to individuals according to their abilities and skills. Moreover, due to the advance transportation, people do not face any difficulity to reach to their job place. The best epitome of this is that, A survey was conducted by Hindustan times, and it revealed the information that 55% people from rural areas come to big cities to make their future bright in terms of getting job in these cities.
There are numerous reasons due to which the lives of people leading a rural life became worst. First of all, Medical treatment is not appropriately available in the villages due to the lack of hospitals and medical dispensaries. Furthermore, people have to come to big cities after passing out miles of distance from their villages during any health emergency. However, one option which can reduce this worsewhile complexity is that government should invest some fund in the development of rural areas by making proper hospitals and giving medical services.
Nevertheless, I tend to believe that it is not possible for rural areas to grow without the aid of government so, government should play a vital role by taking fresh conception to up-lift the level of backward areas as equal as to highly-developed cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, while, as to, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12027491409 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89428692851 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6483877255 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.454545455 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183353066315 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655013353697 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560382312135 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115192467825 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235253562799 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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