Some people think it is goid thing for senior management poaitions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of the same company or organisation. To what extent you agree?
It is incontrovertible fact that in this modern era, every people want many in their life because with the help of money they fulfill their every need. Few masses accord that it is better fir senior manager to have fat pay compared to anthor employes of the same companies. I vehemently agree this statement because they deserve it. I am going to explicate my view ponits in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, there are plethora of reasons why the senior management take the high salaries.The first and foremost, they have multi talented person and a talented manager run the company very frequently. Moreover, the company gain the sucess and prosperity with the dedication and hard work of m6anager. To epitomise, in the office a manager has lot of responsibiltes, if the manager do not do any work properly the company does not run.
To continue my view points, the manager has lot of experience as well as they know how to deal in the critically situation. Furthermore, the manager face the lot of problems and stress in their work which may causes health problem. A good illustarte that is the manager do work every time day and night as compared to the another works while, the they have work in any situtation.Therefore, people should accept the truth that big responsibilities deserve big salaries.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinion. I believe that there is no single conclusion. I think the senior manager deserve the high salaries because the do lot of work with the responibilty, punctuality, leadership as compared to the other employes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98473282443 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01080934363 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553435114504 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9965312164 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204746914914 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653233002319 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683793218608 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128306228541 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389794744568 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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