Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies or interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Throughout the past decade work-related conditions, rules, and norms have undergone dramatic changes all over the world. Moreover, frequently employers enforce workers to provide their personal details. However, a significant amount of people are convinced that such measures are entirely unacceptable and even detrimental to their privacy. On the other hand, there are a vast majority of opponents arguing that it is essentially normal and even beneficial for work in general and employees in particular. This essay aims to investigate the mentioned view and present the crucial reasons as to why it is positive for the global society.
To begin with, In other words, private information can be stolen and be used by villains with employees. Apart from that, that information can generate an unfair prejudice, which in turn, can lead to the tremendous impact on the process of seeking work. It can be illustrated by the latest research, conducted by Dr. Peter O'Brien, which elucidated the fact that there has been a sharp decline in the number of successfully employed workers who have provided their personal details during interviews. Overall, it can be concluded that sometimes employers can be biased by obtaining personal data.
On the other hand, despite the established opinions, submitting any information regarding private life, can be substantially beneficial. That is to say, that this information can be tremendously important in the selection process and can help an employer to encourage worker and provide them what they need in accordance with their characteristic diversities. A paper published by Cambridge University reveals that individuals are more happy and productive by working with colleagues sharing the same mentality. Therefore, it is clearly seen that the idea that personal data collection is deleterious, is ill-informed. Furthermore, it has a positive tendency helping people enjoy their work.
Taking all these points into consideration, it can be concluded that the idea of hiding personal information is completely preposterous. In my opinion, that by demonstrating personal information individuals can make sure that the work they are applying for, suits their character and mentality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, as to, in general, in particular, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54545454545 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1123696436 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577712609971 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5634642252 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.1875 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3125 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6875 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227247731902 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757748428597 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446240560512 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145531301239 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021931278311 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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