Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both the views and give your view.
No doubt pets have eternal love and loyalty towards their owner, however, they are violent in some cases and can cause health issues too. I personally believe that having pets by children are not safe for them. Following essay looks at both sides of the argument.
This is true that pets especially domestic animals like cats and dogs play a significant role in life of a human being when they are trained and treated well. To pet an animal helps a kid to learn several things such as understanding towards animal, love and respect for other creatures too on the planet earth. Domestic animal can be a companion, an entertainer and a guard as well. For example, as per an article printed in a popular magazine in New-York, upbringing of a pet by a kid makes them politer and understanding towards their society and love to other creatures.
On the contrary, irrational animals cannot be compared with human beings. A pet will always remain unhygienic for humans and especially for kids, no matter how much you cared for his wellbeing. Firstly, A pet can be violent and harm a child due to any unwanted fear or constrain. Subsequently, a child immune system is very weak as compared to an adult so can be easily caught be any infection or disease. To illustrate, a vet clinic in Boston stated that children petting animals are mostly suffering with rabies and other deadly disease.
To conclude, petting animals may teach children to show compassion towards other creature, however, there are health risks involved to do so. Therefore, I strongly suggest that children should not be allowed to pet animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, no doubt, such as, in some cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84782608696 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63808674617 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6281826122 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14899771454 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565099443927 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381638137116 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981953481284 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186254206928 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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