The table shows the prices of steel vis-a-vis the consumption in selected countries.
The given table reveals the information about the expenditure of steel and the consumption of steel by the four selected countries: India, China,UK, USA during the year 1992 to 2000.
It can be seen that, startingly, the price of steel in 1992 was 200 ton and afterthat it starts increased and raised to 325 ton in 1994. Apart from that, the price of steel was dereased to 300 ton in the year 1995. Moreover, price were also increased slightly in 1996 and in 2000 to 310 and 320 ton. At the last, the price of steel were decreased fastly to 295, 275 and 250 tons in the year 1997, 1998 and 2000 at the end respectively.
On the other side, the consumption of steel in India in 1990 was 300 million tons, in 1995 it was 500 million tons and in 2000 it was 1000 million tons. Where as, in china, the consumpation on steel were 200 million tons in 1990, 1000 million tons in 1995 and 1200 million tons in 2000. Apart from that, the consumpation of steel in USA and UK were 800 and 400 million tons, 750 and 550 million tons, and 600 and 550 million tons in the year 1990, 1995 and 2000 respectively.
Overall, it is evident that, the highest price of the steel was in 1994 and the consumption of steel were least in china in 1990.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , UK
...he four selected countries: India, China,UK, USA during the year 1992 to 2000. I...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...s and in 2000 it was 1000 million tons. Where as, in china, the consumpation on steel we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30901287554 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31114983201 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.416309012876 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4540216946 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.555555556 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161167844044 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926284602347 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696735864818 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146280654715 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745908850289 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.4 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.1 10.3012195122 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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