Over the past few decades, there has been a high degree of ambivalence over this matter whether regions influence the successful person or not. This has elicited stimulated disputation among the public. Whereas, some people say that the accomplished person has very little or no influence on their native region. In my opinion, the accomplished person has a greater influence on the region they belong too. This essay will further discuss reasons to support this notion and then deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, conspicuously, there are myriads of reasons to support this notion, but one of the most compelling reason is that accomplished person becomes a role modal for the people of the region. For Example, when a person becomes famous or achieve something like a sports star or a movie start, the people of that region would feel proud of that person and lots of youngsters would follow the same path.
On the contrary, there are some skeptics who conjecture that accomplished person has a very little effect on the region. As the accomplished person, most of the time would not look back and forgets their native land. Although it seems ostensibly veridical this is not the case, as even the accomplished persons are not able to visit the place frequently still their news in media make the equal impact.
After analyzing the above facts, In my opinion, I would like to say that the accomplished person has a great influence on the region they belong too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, still, then, whereas, for example, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 250.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.928 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62022899763 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 380.7 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2626350845 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.25397266985 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397217324135 0.242375264174 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172081473491 0.0925447433944 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115314018235 0.071462118173 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25806065567 0.151781067708 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488791426187 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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