Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that develop the mind, such as reading and doing crossword puzzles, other people feel it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss your opinion.?

Submitted by Davi kaur on Mon, 08/06/2018 - 22:50

One of the conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of working hours that made the human life stressed. According to my viewpoint, the people should relax their mind when they have free time, while on the other hand stands a perspective that leisure time should be used wisely by playing puzzle games and reading books that help to develop the human mind. This essay will further elaborate on both the sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of arguments in favour of my stance.The most preponderant one is that the people should relax their mind in their free time to make it more active. By relaxing for a while, the human brain will not only generate new ideas, it will also help the keep the human away from chronic diseases like as, depression and asthma. For example, according to the research published in “The leisure time” 80 percent of people who relaxed their mind in the spare time considered far active and participative as compared to others. For this reason, the people should relax their mind in the leisure time.
Notwithstanding, some people hold an opposing view and tend to believe that leisure time should be used accurately by playing puzzle games and reading books. This is because, these extra curriculum activities can help the human to develop their brain. As an illustration, according to a recent survey people who participate in games and book reading are more likely to generate new ideas. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of reading books and doing crossword puzzles in the free time.
In view of arguments outlined above, one can conclude that, different people prefer distinct activities to relax their mind according to their own interest and benefits.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, thus, while, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92666666667 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56059888828 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523333333333 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8270758221 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.166666667 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298954342663 0.242375264174 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123509034337 0.0925447433944 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101113456883 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186769863924 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560345683495 0.0609392437508 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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