Every person should stay at school until 18. Do you agree or disagree?
It is undoubtfully true that education is a key to the success, therefore, many researchers and educators believe that every individual ought to study till high school. I strongly agree with it and would discuss compelling evidence for my belief in this essay.
The non-developing poor countries have high crime rates and unlawful activities, especially in a young generation. Moreover, they have unethical behaviour towards humans and animals. Many people are extremely poor that they cannot afford education expenses. Another reason worth mentioning is, a majority of government schools in these countries have a poor education system which leads the young people to involve in unlawful activities or some people suffers extreme depression for the burden of the education and job for their family and young siblings, thus they ended up to leave the education in the middle school. This tendency is detrimental and fragmented for the youth and the country subsequently.
However, developing countries such as the golf and Europeans have lower crime rates and every individual are well aware of laws, which they try to follow. Although crime rates cannot be overlooked, considering they have fewer in their records compare to the poor countries. Individual try to contribute their skills to grow their country's economy and make their country richer.
In general, I pen down saying that at least a high school education should not be neglected. Education is a road to success and everyone should gain knowledge which is better for themselves and for the sake of their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, at least, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31349206349 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78191019147 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7698910445 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.583333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0777188578855 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309945481834 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414271520128 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606219928131 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407385920751 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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