Some people say that what children watch on TV influence their behaviour while others say that say the amount of time they spend watching TV influences their behaviour.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One of the highly controversial issue today relates to what kids wasting time on TV have a negative impact on them or what they are watching changes them. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and give my own perspective on the matter.
On one side of this argument, there are people who argue that watching Tv have a considerable negative effect on young kids. Moreover, kids who have been watching bad movies or shows, for Instance, sexual, adultery, crime movies have bad conduct. It is also possible to say that watching such shows or movies have detrimental effects on their behaviour. one illustration of this is that a 6 years old kid commit a suicide by hanging in a rope in his home, admittedly, he usually watches crime Tv shows.
On the other hand, it is also possible to say that watching TV for long hours can make them lazy and dependent on their parents for every single thing. It is often argued that people become overweight by sedentary work or watch Tv for long hours, so does young kids. A particularly good example here is a research that conducted in 2006, 65% of American kids were overweight during this survey.
In conclusion, I believe that both arguments have their merits. On balance, I tend to believe that the issue is what is being watched on TV. Kids should not be neglected and left alone with TV.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...detrimental effects on their behaviour. one illustration of this is that a 6 years ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60162601626 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51403621331 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1398852242 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281455177969 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105157427252 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665211389364 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165103915164 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105498773876 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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