Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitor are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
The advent of technology has benefited many human lives in many ways. It is very easy to trace someone’s activity through mobile phones. There is no doubt true that advantages of this innovation are more than disadvantages.
Technology has improved in the globe and now it is convenient for people to buy products such as (mobile phones, computers, Tablets) which is essential and cost effective in this era. Many people get involved in criminal activities by miss using internet excessively especially young generation. A particular example here is “Dark Web” where lot of criminal activities happens. Most of dark web users are under 35, who have already wasted their lives in such activities. If they were under parents or government’s eyes they would not be get involved. To sabotage these kind of acts, authorities use surveillance which is very beneficial act. Another example here is if technology would be that advanced om 9’11 incident there would not be any damage and people would not loose their loved ones.
On the other hand, there is an opposing case. By monitoring normal public and put false doubt on innocent people cause them harm and people have already loose many lives and many have lost their identy and are going through demensia. A good example here is, my friend’s brother caught by CIA on the bases of words he used on the phone during his conversation to his friend. He had to went through tourcher and physically abused which cause him serious health problem. Authorities should not always put doubt on all civilions
In conclusion, surveillance is good to prohibit odd activities and it should be essential for authorties to use technology to prevent it but I must say that innocent civillions should not face unhealthy treatment for those crime that they didn’t do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 577, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... would not be get involved. To sabotage these kind of acts, authorities use surveillance w...
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Line 4, column 790, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... not be any damage and people would not loose their loved ones. On the other hand,...
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Line 8, column 218, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this crime' or 'those crimes'?
Suggestion: this crime; those crimes
...should not face unhealthy treatment for those crime that they didn't do.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12292358804 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85504442758 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601328903654 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4166135881 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243089334926 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648703924644 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492278286644 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134754533204 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203351589467 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.