You went to a theater yesterday with a friend. Your friend had an accident and a staff member helped. Write to manager:
• How it happened
• How staff member helped
• What should be done in future.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complaint about the inconvenience caused due to poor quality of chairs in the theater hall.
Yesterday, I, along with my friend, went to see a movie called ‘The Mast’ in the evening show. Everything was going fine until my friend’s chair got broke down in the middle of the show, which left us all in shock as it happened very spontaneously. Fortunately, there were no injury but it could have serious consequences if the debris from the broke chair had pierced in any body parts.
The staff on the ground was quite helpful, they immediately offered us new seats, which were way more comfortable and safe. They even stopped the movie until we had settled down to new place, which made few people from the audience very unhappy.
I would be really grateful if the proper examination of arrangements is conducted before beginning of each show to ensure safety of people. In this way, such incidents, especially which can lead to chaos in the public place, can be avoided easily.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sandip Ramani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anybody'?
Suggestion: anybody
...ris from the broke chair had pierced in any body parts. The staff on the ground was q...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92105263158 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67470452972 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.721052631579 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4979746316 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12405411537 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431938645485 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274731137063 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525756255578 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256295910349 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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