The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

THE TABLE ILLUSTRATES THE LAND COVERED BY THE FOREST IN MILLIONS OF HECTARES ACROSS THE SIX PARTS(AFRICA,ASIA,EUROPE,NORTH AMERICA,OCEANIA,SOUTH AMERICA) OF THE WORLD DURING THE THREE DIFFERNT YEARS.

OVERALL, ONLY EUROPE WAS CONTINUE TO GREW UP THEIR FOREST AREA COMPARED TO OTHERS.THE HIGEST FORESTRY PLACE DEVELOPED IN THE LAST FIVE YEARS.

IN 1990.EUROPE AND SOUTH AMERICA HAD ALMOST SIMILARE FORESTRY LANDS( WHICH WERE 989 HECTARES AND 946 HECTARES RESPECTIVELY),ALSO BOTH WERE GREATER THAN OTHERS AREAS, WHILE OCENIA WAS ONLY EVOLVED LEAST 199 HECTARES.HOWEVER,ANOTHER THREE PARTS OF THE WORLD HAD BEEN GREW AVERAGE AMOUNT OF FOREST(IT WERE 576,749 AND 708 HECTEARS RESPECTIVELY).

MOREOVER,BETWEEN 2000 TO 2005,NORTH AMERICA REMAINED CONSTANT FOR FORESTED LAND IT WAS 705 HECTARES, WHEREAS EUROPE WAD STEDILY INCREASED THEIR FOREST LAND AT THE SAME TIME UP TO 998 TO 1001 HECTARES.HOWEVER.OTHERS PLACES OF THE GLOBE WERE DECREASED THE DEVELOPMENT OF THE FORESTERY AREA OVER THE TIME(FOR OCENIA 197 HA,AFRICA 691 HA AND ASIA 584 HA).

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ASIA
...S OF HECTARES ACROSS THE SIX PARTSAFRICA,ASIA,EUROPE,NORTH AMERICA,OCEANIA,SOUTH AMER...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , NORTH
...S ACROSS THE SIX PARTSAFRICA,ASIA,EUROPE,NORTH AMERICA,OCEANIA,SOUTH AMERICA OF THE WO...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , OCEANIA
...IX PARTSAFRICA,ASIA,EUROPE,NORTH AMERICA,OCEANIA,SOUTH AMERICA OF THE WORLD DURING THE T...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: Continued
...ERNT YEARS. OVERALL, ONLY EUROPE WAS CONTINUE TO GREW UP THEIR FOREST AREA COMPARED T...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...PE AND SOUTH AMERICA HAD ALMOST SIMILARE FORESTRY LANDS WHICH WERE 989 HECTARES A...
^^
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ALSO
...9 HECTARES AND 946 HECTARES RESPECTIVELY,ALSO BOTH WERE GREATER THAN OTHERS AREAS, WH...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ANOTHER
... ONLY EVOLVED LEAST 199 HECTARES.HOWEVER,ANOTHER THREE PARTS OF THE WORLD HAD BEEN GREW ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: Grown
...OTHER THREE PARTS OF THE WORLD HAD BEEN GREW AVERAGE AMOUNT OF FORESTIT WERE 576,749...
^^^^
Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , BETWEEN
...D 708 HECTEARS RESPECTIVELY. MOREOVER,BETWEEN 2000 TO 2005,NORTH AMERICA REMAINED CON...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , AFRICA
...TERY AREA OVER THE TIMEFOR OCENIA 197 HA,AFRICA 691 HA AND ASIA 584 HA.
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...A 197 HA,AFRICA 691 HA AND ASIA 584 HA.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69871794872 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.07742195787 2.65546596893 154% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7816796457 43.030603864 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.25 112.824112599 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 22.9334400587 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 5.23603664747 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110240370267 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069298219692 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412996319811 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069298219692 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412996319811 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.2329268293 188% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 61.2550243902 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 11.4140731707 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.06136585366 138% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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