You live in a room in a college where you share your room with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and difficult to work or study. write a letter to the accommodation office, at the college. In letter, you should
1 Describe the situation
2. explain the problem and why it is difficult to work
3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.
Dear Sir,
I am John staying in room 215 in the college hostel. I am writing this letter to let you know that I am unhappy with my current living conditions. While accommodation itself is fine, my roommate is the who is making it intolerable making it almost impossible for studying.
To start with, the trouble started three months ago when my housemate first moved in. Prior to that, everything was absolutely fine, my old roommate was extremely considerate. However, my current roommate stays up almost all night and plays incessantly loud music. Sometimes he comes with his friends and parties all night. As such, I am not able to sleep properly and does not have a fruitful production in my work and cannot concentrate on my studies.
Would you kindly transfer me or my roommate to other room? I would much prefer to stay with someone who is quieter and considerate others. I do not mind whoever it is to live with until it is a good place to study.
Thank you for the consideration,
John.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, while, you know, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71186440678 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70019854262 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9214042319 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204370542469 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076285147535 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670162179277 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141228616503 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586491689132 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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