To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Any country is renowned globally based on popularity of their prominent provinces as it is believed that major cities mainly represents country's culture. Most of the Europian countries have influence of languages such as French, German and Italian which makes them unique. These countries have profound lineage and fundamental history of their culture. Same is reflected in the culture of people from Rome and Paris.
Traditional values of such cities like celebration of different festivals and religious activities attracts tourism and generate revenue for country. Additionally opportunities provided by such cities attracts people from different region of the world and eventually makes city consisting of mixed culture. Then it becomes difficult to filter out primary culture from the mixed one.
On the other side, villages which also fortitude country's economy equally play a vital role in representing culture. So sometime it will be fatuous decision to focus only on cities to understand culture, rural areas are also equally important. Even some society does not belongs to any major city. In some cases, societies are disseminated over multiple regions both rural as well as urban.
It can be concluded that one must to find out root to which traits of societies belongs to which can be independent of area or region in order to get familiar with the culture and tradition, not to focus on major cities which sometime can mislead too.
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- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. 16
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...urism and generate revenue for country. Additionally opportunities provided by such cities a...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belong'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: belong
...y important. Even some society does not belongs to any major city. In some cases, socie...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
...y important. Even some society does not belongs to any major city. In some cases, socie...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...inated over multiple regions both rural as well as urban. It can be concluded that one ...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... urban. It can be concluded that one must to find out root to which traits of societ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, well, even so, such as, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2987012987 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6927311687 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614718614719 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1729894997 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0754087531424 0.243740707755 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250773922763 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265909320884 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439524444268 0.150359130593 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191285209239 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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