Over the past few decades, there has been a high degree of the ambivalence over this matter whether the violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. This has elicited stimulating disputation among the public. Where some people say that it does not increase the crime in our society, I sanguinely believe that it does. This essay will further elaborate reasons to support this notion and deduce a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons to support this notion but one of the most compelling reason is that when people watch the violence on the TV it gradually impact their mental health. Due to this people become impatient and violent. For example, Scientist has done some research where they have found that people watching violent movies are more likely to become the criminals.
On the contrary, there are skeptics who conjecture that, it's not the movies which makes a person violent it's their upbringing which impacts the human behavior. Although this seems ostensibly veridical this is not true. There are examples where people born and brought up in the good families become the criminal, on the studies of such cases it was found that the people use to watch the violent movies.
After analyzing the above facts I would like to recapitulate that violence shown on TV and in the movies lead to an increase in the crime in our society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80408163265 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38815625446 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538775510204 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.640838246 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2727272727 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362156598661 0.242375264174 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121984715725 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103463685861 0.071462118173 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228085164027 0.151781067708 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745433645405 0.0609392437508 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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