The rapid urbanization and globalization has lead to several changes like working conditions are now different from past. And, people are no longer dependent on one job for living. Here, reasons behind this issue along with suggestions to prepare for work in future will be scrutinise.
Admittedly, in this modern era people's life style has changed, they now use to live for their comforts rather than for living. People have turned materialistic they want to earn more and have a luxurious life. For instance, people now want to buy modern gadgets and make their task easier. Moreover, the needs have also increased, parents have to spend on education, transportation and food of their child. Expenses have elevated as compared to past so to live a comfortable life they are not relied on taking one job. Thus, this all is because of modernization, which has effected lives of people.
However, in future numerous machines will be there in various fields like factories, restaruants and in hospitals as well. So, to safeguard their jobs individuals have to excel in their profession, they should work hard to atain success. Furthermore, type of work will also be changed as in past when cars were invented, it was bane for people working in horse cart industry, whhereas, on other side it created several job opportunities. People should be aware of ne inventions are their effects related to their industry. Hence, some efforts and hardworking can assist people to prepare for future.
In conclusion, the risen needs and choice of people to live with all contemporary inventions and innovations is responsible for this new trend . These suggestions can help to have secure job in future as well
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- The unlimited use of cars may cause many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce the problems, should we discourage people to use cars?. 78
- The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020. 78
- Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned.Discuss the main arguments for thi 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06761565836 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80576016905 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2032070865 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329844462523 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109094784494 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706137666195 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213138383368 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776048373673 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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