Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
I completely agree with the statement “Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain”. In the current era we can clearly notice that there is a decrease in the population of wild animals due to various factors, it is the obligation of the nation to protect animals and wilderness area.
The population of the wild animals are decreasing mainly because of the human activities(building the roads in the forest area,hunting etc), climate change etc. In order to increase the population of wild animals certain laws should be passed like restriction of vehicles entering the forest, improving the area by planting more trees. As a result of all these activities population of animals can be increased to a certain extent.
Tourism is one of main factor contributing the economic development of a nation. A nation must focus on the tourism by investing the additional funds on the tourism. In karnataka, the Nagarhole forest is one of the attraction for tourists where tourists visits more in number. The surrounding places of wild life should also be kept clean in order to attract more tourists.
It’s a duty of a nation to protect its wild animals not only for the economic purpose but for the better future of the animals. If no precautions are take then a day might come when a person cann’t see a single animal.
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Line 2, column 335, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...roving the area by planting more trees. As a result of all these activities popula...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'activities'' or 'activity's'?
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...ng more trees. As a result of all these activities population of animals can be increased ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97510373444 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92590853499 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576763485477 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6104089478 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406150972806 0.243740707755 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135545301876 0.0831039109588 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193861638606 0.0758088955206 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232432415051 0.150359130593 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.211913773929 0.0667264976115 318% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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