Scientists have been warning for many years already that in order to protect the environment people should use less energy. However, most people do not change their ways of living. What is causing this behaviour? How can people be encouraged to change?
Environment plays a vital role in human life. It is a generator of many resources which are very essential for our daily routine. People are simply ignoring the Environment by just avoiding their part of contribution. People giving high priority to their lifestyle and daily comforts where they are tending to destruct their future by ignoring Environment. I want to discuss how people justifying their part of destruction to environment and ways to save natural resources and mother nature.
To trigger with, There are plethora of reasons why people are not interested to protect environment. Individuals are in a state of mind that they are using a bit of extra resources for their comforts. For instance, When I was in a conversation with one of the people, He started argument that he is using a bit of more resources that nowhere be a reason for environmental destruction. If every individual started to think in the same way, It leads to a huge damage.
To Reduce effect on environment, I have plethora of thoughts. The Government should come up with new plans, For example giving incentives to the people who are using low quantity of resources. On other hand giving tax exceptions to the industries which are environment friendly. These policies will benifit both individuals and the environment.
To put it into a nut shell , I pen down stating that environment is everyone's property . by one or the other way we need to save it. people should get educated on this aspect and should change their life style to protect environment.
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- Scientists have been warning for many years already that in order to protect the environment people should use less energy. However, most people do not change their ways of living. What is causing this behaviour? How can people be encouraged to change? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge damage'.
Suggestion: huge damage
...d to think in the same way, It leads to a huge damage. To Reduce effect on environment, I ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ffect on environment, I have plethora of thoughts. The Government should come up ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...vironment. To put it into a nut shell , I pen down stating that environment is ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...g that environment is everyones property . by one or the other way we need to sav...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...hat environment is everyones property . by one or the other way we need to save i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yones property . by one or the other way we need to save it. people should get ed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, for instance, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97307692308 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92940112388 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4228364724 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274777346199 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822598708373 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688490966824 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161349543575 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443270638816 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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