More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?
There have been huge advancements in the field of Science and Technology since the last century which also brought a major change in lifestyles of human being. According to this situation, moving to cities from the agricultural land has always been put to question. I will discuss in this essay the pros and cons related to it.
Agriculture is the backbone of the economy of any country. The food production and supply solely depends on the agricultural yield which directly benefits the ordinary citizens. Unfortunately, this sector has never been given importance by the Government of any country in the world in order to boost agriculture. The life of the poor farmers becomes miserable working whole day in the sun and then waiting for months for the yield of crops. They have to ultimately sell crops in which they are not benefited as they desire. They become degraded and considered as low-class families. To improve their lifestyle, they prefer to head towards the cities in order to earn well and lead a respectful and lavish life.
If we would expect more and more farmers to quit from the agricultural sector, there would be a huge influx of people in the cities and cities would become overcrowded. There would be people in cities mostly with no educational and technology background. They would rather become burden on the cities because question would be raised for their re-settlement. It would take a long time to adjust in the fast life of cities and educate oneself and search for a respected job. Therefore, moving to a new place from a different background and lifestyle is not as easy as it seems like.
I would rather recommend some solution regarding this matter. The first and foremost thing is that the Government of any country should play vital role in creating a balance between all the sectors of the country. Money shall be invested in the agriculture as well along with as being in education, health and technology sectors. Incentives should be provided to the farmers to improve their working conditions, equip them with machinery and increase the crop production so that they would become satisfied with their profession. There should be free education provided to the children of the farmers and new techniques and methodologies should be introduced in their schools so that they also proudly step into this profession in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 730, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... also proudly step into this profession in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98740554156 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71662906429 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51637279597 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0040405078 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215273394509 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646976269319 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529092807272 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123592435209 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499034481184 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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