the trend of purchasing goods at large shopping malls as compared to small shops
There are a number of positive consequences of having a large shopping mall in the vicinity. One of these is, As these big malls are one-stop one store they offer not only a stunning range of commodities to customers, but also provide a plethora of amenities, such as ample car parking space, ATM machines, card payment methods, elevators, central air-conditioning and more importantly surveillance cameras and sensors are installed to secure the belongings of clients. As a result shoppers purchasing has become stress-free, with an abundance of leisure time for relaxation and enjoyment. Another positive implication is, people who wish to buy branded items can do so as many multi-national companies have franchised their product portfolio in such chain stores, such as Amazon, Adidas, Apple, and Samsung. Hence the quality is assured and fewer chances to cheat on prices. However, this does not mean that they tend to sell only branded items but they also have adequate generic products. What is more, buyers have the fortune to purchase bulk quantities at the lowest rate, whereas in small boutique shops customers would not receive this sort of facilities. A prime example is in my country Sri Lanka the ‘Arpico Hyde Park Corner’, where a lot of populace come to purchase as all sorts of goods available there. In this circumstance, it is possible to argue that small shop stores are outdated and this has largely overtaken by department stores.
Due to the rising influx of big enterprises in the metropolitan cities, there are a few dire ramifications associated. One of them is they pose a severe threat to national economy and livelihood of people who owns retail shops. When they cannot sell their items, spontaneously cash flow will diminish and causing immense problems for their families. This, in turn, means that they might have to closure their sops sooner or later due to the dearth of business potentials. Unfortunately, this leads them to branch out to other means of business, which may be a herculean task. Another negative implication is clients will not have the fortune to bargain or purchase products on installment basis in such mega malls in comparison to boutique stores. As a result of this, lower and middle-income individuals will be forced to shop at chain stores as they do not have any other alternatives. Umpteen number of cases have been reported that a colossal of small shops are going out of business due to the large presence of convenient stores.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: ATM_MACHINE[2]
Message: This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply 'ATMs'.
Suggestion: ATMs
...ities, such as ample car parking space, ATM machines, card payment methods, elevators, centr...
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Line 1, column 810, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... as Amazon, Adidas, Apple, and Samsung. Hence the quality is assured and fewer chance...
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Line 1, column 1255, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun populace seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of populaces'.
Suggestion: a lot of populaces
...os;Arpico Hyde Park Corner', where a lot of populace come to purchase as all sorts of goods ...
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Line 3, column 1037, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he large presence of convenient stores.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, whereas, sort of, such as, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06295399516 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8856459812 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590799031477 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9068453266 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203568788115 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665552997174 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845580222105 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164408695346 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424012149529 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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