Undoubtedly, the number of shopping malls has increased astronomically in major cities and towns. Customers increasingly troop to these shopping centers to purchase goods that are of interest to them. However, the amount of time spent by customers, especially the youth, could culminate in both negative and positive result.
There is no denying the fact that the youth spend a greater chunk of time in shopping malls, closely inspecting one item to another till they find the item of interest to buy.It may be argued that not spending precious time to look at items displayed in shopping malls before buying may lead to purchasing fake or substandard goods. Another argument that might be raised in favour of the youth spending collosus amount of time in shopping malls maybe that the youth readily have an immediate opportunity to purchase items on clearance sale in which prices have been drastically reduced during shopping time among others. However, it must be pointed out that the negative effects of spending too much time in shopping malls far out-weigh the benefits.
In the first place, the attitude of laziness on the part of the youth could be nurtured by prolonged stay in shopping malls. A lot of productive hours would be lost as they youth spend a lot of hours in shopping malls without working. Therefore, the direct effect would be nothing short of low economic out-put. The preponderance of youth unemployment in recent times could be as a result of attitude of laziness on the part of the youth which has a contribution from spending much time at shopping malls and other places.
Additionally, the vice of armed robbery considerably associated with the youth is a twin negative effect that might be associated with youth spending a great deal of time in shopping malls. Some items in display in shopping malls maybe of great interest to the youth but the youth cannot afford to buy those items. For this reason, they youth have no other option than to steal and rob people of monies and other valuables in order to be able to purchase such items in the shopping malls that they crave to have. Consequently, there would be general insecurity in society as people stand a risk of being robbed and killed.
Conclusively, there are benefits derived as they youth spend so much time in shopping malls. Nevertheless, they disadvantages associated with prolonged stay by the youth in shopping malls are worth more considering than ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95399515738 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67860090817 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3930927009 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.875 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8125 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210782304997 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823675203414 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484528580003 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128843862753 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474987157397 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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