The given bar chart illustrates the information about the number Japanese community who has travelled to overseas countries from 1985 to 1995. Whereas, The line graph represents the data about Australians shares in Japan's tourist market.
Overall, It can be seen that There was continues progress of Japnese tourist travelling to other countries untill 1991. On the other hand, The percentages of Australian shares of Japan's tourist market were fluctuated over a given period of time
According to bar chart, In 1985 about five millions people of Japan's travelled to overseas countries, Further this trend had been growing to 11 millions in 1990, Before fallen by 1 million in next year. Thereafter, The numbers of Japnese traveller to abroad gradually rose reaching to approximately 15 millions in last period .
Regards to line graph, Initially about two percentage of Australia shares came in Japan's tourist market. Then it's gradually incresed to 5 percent in 1988. After which went down by 1 percent in next year, Thereafter, The percentages of shares slightly incresed to about six percent in 1993, Then which remained unchange untill end.
- The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 78
- The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. 73
- Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 96
- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lians shares in Japans tourist market. Overall, It can be seen that There was c...
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...ist market were fluctuated over a given period of time According to bar chart, In 19...
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...fluctuated over a given period of time According to bar chart, In 1985 about fi...
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...approximately 15 millions in last period . Regards to line graph, ...
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...oximately 15 millions in last period . Regards to line graph, Initially about t...
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...res came in Japans tourist market. Then its gradually incresed to 5 percent in 1988...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26775956284 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72284235871 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.8980840317 43.030603864 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211392451274 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951534977252 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652693355721 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133128206047 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713253335842 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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