A child of today is men of tomorrow. In recent years, population of some countries include a large number of teenagers , compared with the number of older people. It is a huge positive signal for any nation. Now, some brief explanation about the merits or demerits of this topic.
On the one hand, there are numerous types of demerits for huge number of younger adults. First and foremost, where there is largest number of youngsters, it is possible to soaring crime rate. Furthermore, it increases the demand of jobs and better living conditions. As a result, sometimes government facing strikes and create violence by the adults. Apart from that, at the present time , some nations facing these problems. For instance, some countries like India is the most younger nation, however, here is the maximum number of unemployment and it is shocking to see that their government did not capable to provided facilities for own youngsters.
On the other hand, then, let us examine about that the some merits of large number of youngsters.In addition to that, sometimes new creation activities and experiments are very helpful for nation. Some youngsters which earning very well , he has possible to donate many poor people, hence, reduce the burden of social budget of government whose highly pay for older people. Moreover, it also helps to increase nationa's strength and economics.
In the epilogue, younger is an indispensable part of every nation. Adults are bridge between older people and government.
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their time. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 56
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disvantages? 56
- Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 56
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their time. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 56
- Competition increases in every person's life .To what extend do you agree or disagree ? 22
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s, population of some countries include a large number of teenagers , compared with the number of...
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Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ries include a large number of teenagers , compared with the number of older peopl...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the largest'.
Suggestion: is the largest
...adults. First and foremost, where there is largest number of youngsters, it is possible to...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'soar'?
Suggestion: soar
...number of youngsters, it is possible to soaring crime rate. Furthermore, it increases t...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ts. Apart from that, at the present time , some nations facing these problems. For...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
...tance, some countries like India is the most younger nation, however, here is the maximum nu...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...nd, then, let us examine about that the some merits of large number of youngsters.In...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...me merits of large number of youngsters.In addition to that, sometimes new creatio...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... Some youngsters which earning very well , he has possible to donate many poor peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15102040816 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70423560707 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.1553764882 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282555302685 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817276195479 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118493953032 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161782032293 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111322755665 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.