Many elderly people are no longer looked after their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and give your opinion?
In the era of rapidly evolving technology, everyone is so busy in his or her works that he or she don’t give a proper time and care to his or her parents. For this reason, they sent them to the care centre to look after them. This essay will suggest that putting them in the nursing home for their better care is a primary disadvantage but left them at an older age is a major disadvantage.
To embark with an optimistic side, it is the desire of everybody to live an exquisite lifestyle. They do a lot of hard work to get this life. Therefore, they are not able to spend much time with their parents. They know that these care homes are fruitful to take good care of their parents. There will be more focus on their health treatment. Furthermore, their parents would love to talk with other people in these homes. For example, there are high-renowned nursing homes which provide better facilities and give proper attention to the older ages.
On the paradoxical side, every parent wants to pass their remaining time with their children. They did a lot of hard work for the good future of their children. It is the first and foremost duty of us to take special care of our parents. Moreover, many parents are not able to indulge in that environment and as a result, they become suffocated and faced many psychological problems. For example, fear and sorrow of keeping far away from their families lead them to many health diseases.
To recapitulate, kept them in those homes is not a right way for their lives and sometimes it can lead to a disaster for them. As per my observation, parents are the great blessing of the God. They only want love, affection from us. They sacrificed their whole lives for us and we put them into those nursing centres.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55520504732 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49729525592 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523659305994 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2242171181 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217535093733 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066034104612 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489102785991 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135918837148 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450379522399 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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