Different People have different and as well conflicting views about certain aspects.What may sound suitable for one, may be even destructive for other.Some people hold a believe that zoos are cruel for animals as they tend to restrict their movement and make their life miserable,others believe zoos play a crucial role in the protection of the endangered or rare species.In my opinion there is need to understand both perspectives and then, jump on to any conclusion.
According to some people zoos are brutal for animals as they are not allowed to roam freely.I think each and every animal living on the earth should have a right to live without any sort of boundation.Keeping the animals in the zoo just for sake of public entertainment is just not acceptable.
On the other hand,I agree that zoos play a pivotal role in preservation of the animals that are on the verge of becoming extinct anytime soon.Keeping endangered species in the zoo provide them an oppurtunity to sustain and grow their population which otherwise is an herculine task.
Finally,I would like to recapitulate by writing that the need of the hour is to pay equal weightage on each and every perspective before concluding anything.It is essential to look at a broader aspect for maintaining an ecological balance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, may, so, then, well, i think, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06542056075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06927897132 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.5171411782 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 271.0 106.682146367 254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.5 20.7667163134 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 7.06120827912 319% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257571537237 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130388533083 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846749183066 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130388533083 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846749183066 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.2 13.0946893788 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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