Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies, factories, and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people state that the relocation of companies and their facilities to the countryside could be of great help to address traffic congestion and housing issues in big cities. I believe there are better measurements for these problems.
It is understandable why individuals think that moving business and industry outside of the cities could enhance the current state of traffic and housing problems. One reason is that an exceeding amount of space in cities is being used up for company headquarters and factories. Changing the location of these facilities, therefore, means that more room is reserved for widening streets and constructing residential buildings. Another reason is that the redistribution of population as a result of such a solution would also be a significant factor to improve traffic jam and accommodation problems. Since workers have to reside themselves in other areas to continue working for their relocated companies, the number of urban citizens will be greatly reduced.
However, there are other methods to deal with such city problems. Firstly, governments should invest in the construction of more traffic infrastructures. With more streets available for traveling, car drivers will have more options to get to destinations and thus, the density of vehicles on a single road will be deduced. Secondly, strict control of migrants from other cities or provinces should also enhance the housing problem. For example, since the restriction of workers from Binh Duong province, Ho Chi Minh City is now capable of accommodating 4 millions of local dwellers.
In conclusion, while relocating large companies and employees is an acceptable solution for traffic and housing problems, I believe that there are more viable methods viable for consideration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 554, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '4 million'.
Suggestion: 4 million
...nh City is now capable of accommodating 4 millions of local dwellers. In conclusion, while...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47101449275 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05003606812 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.378542075 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.153846154 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193171318838 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667699270058 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496676083012 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120161747686 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315197446753 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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