Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern century of technology, people are getting the advantage of high speed internet by seating in front of their PC or laptop. You can search anything you want in the search engine like google or yahoo, and these type of virtual engines provide you with a myriad amount of information. Though some information are deteriorating, in most cases these informations give us the space for getting into the access to the modern technological world.
First and foremost, Internet is one of the most innovative creation of modern century. Someone can get any information h/s wants within few seconds. Just think about the ancient time. People could not imagined these types of technology that we are using now. At that time people used letters to pass information which was carried by individuals or transport. But now, you have your PC or smartphone. Whenever you need to communicate with other person, you can just log into your email, Facebook, whats up or you can call the person directly. If a scientist need to gather some information for his/her project, h/s can just search this topic into internet. That provide the scientist a lot of information regarding to this topic. For instance, During my project of 4th year, i had a very complicated topics. So i used to gather information from internet. I read publications of world renowned scientists from goggle scholar or IEEE journals. Those information provide me a cogent background for my task. However, If i were the student of the same department during couple of decades ago, then for the same task i would just rely upon some books and had to do some tough task like searching manually.
Secondly, Think about a situation that i can't reach to my friends for couple of hours. I and others are trying to contact him but he doesn't pick up the phone. Then how can i get the information about him? Nowadays its very easy to track someone by GPS tracker. I can easily find out my friends by using this technology and also can be sure that he is not in a dangerous situation. Moreover, Imagine that if you are in new city and you have no idea about the geographic condition of the city. Then what actually you will do? Nowadays, Its very easy to move in a completely unknown city or country. Because you have your smartphone and you can get the information of the location and your current position by using goggle map applications.
Finally, The information that we need in our daily life has no limit. From dawn to dusk, You need information. For instance, After waking up from bed you need the news of today's world, share markets statistics or the result of the game of your favorite clubs. After that someone need the information of today's traffic situation for taking the decision for the departure time towards the office. After reaching into the office, your boss assigned you some task. Again you need some valuable information for the task. After completing the task, your mind need some relax. For that you need some songs or music videos or a fascinating games. You need information till the night when you will go to bed for sleep. All of them are very important information for your life. And if you want to get those information, you need internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'Those informations'?
Suggestion: This information; Those informations
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'those informations'?
Suggestion: this information; those informations
...n for your life. And if you want to get those information, you need internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.0752688172 334% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2668.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 563.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73889875666 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62995988824 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490230905861 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 831.6 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3873140371 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1081081081 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2162162162 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40540540541 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 20.0 4.88709677419 409% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247480084653 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659079472179 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430602892828 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159699118069 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420299516177 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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