Some people believe modern technology has made people believe it make less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Due to rapid advancement of technology, a drastic change has arrived in each and every field . There is an alluring trend these days of social networking sites. Let us delve deeper and look at the both sides of a coin before concluding any opinion.
In this modern era, people are always busy and social on social networking sites and applications. It has bestowed us with multiple options of connecting with friends and family staying at distant places not only by one platform but tremendous of them are present in market like Facebook, Instagram whats app and so on. Moreover people are getting social not only with their near and dear one but they are also using it for expanding their work circle. For example an HR Recruiter can find multiple new connects and candidates on LinkedIn. According to a recent survey published in Hindustan Times 80-90% of recruitment are covered by various social websites.
On the other hand, apart from having positive effects of technology there are some negative impacts also on social life of people. They are majorly into virtual world as compared to real world as they are spending more time online which is making them isolated from their family and friends. They start taking their closed ones as granted moreover they are not interested in having interaction with them. Additionally, young generation is getting indulge in wrong deeds due to some people present on these websites which in turn is dangerous for the society.
In my opinion, technology has become the part and parcel of our life so getting online is quint essential for our progressive life but people need to understand and make corrective usage of it.
To sum up, it is a demand of society to stay updated, upgraded and to walk with the fast pace of life, however everything should be used in a well versed manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87539936102 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52789219607 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610223642173 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0979148279 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113795387525 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389763136727 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422028507091 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582829915811 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390789154861 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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