It is difficult to find a person who wouldn’t like to spend money. There was a time when people used to indulge in transactions through cash. But today cashless transaction is the need of the hour. Hence people use credit cards to buy something. Is this good or bad is discussed below:
Using credit cards are beneficial as it saves lots of time. One doesn’t have to stand in queues. Shopping online is more fun than enduring the physical pain to move around supermarkets. This is possible because of credit cards. Citizens of this global village are no more afraid to be robbed of the petty cash in their pockets. Not only shopping but paying bills are easier now. With the swipe of the cards, life has become smooth.
On the contrary, there are some loopholes in these cashless transactions. Due to system error or malware, some payments may go to the wrong account. Hackers are not only hacking the bank accounts but also creating fictitious websites. These kinds of websites are robbing customers in daylight. If the card is lost and falls in some wrong hand, then the owner of the card is doomed. Moreover, the banks are levying hidden charges on every card transaction.
Being the part of this modern world is full of good and bad deeds. Similarly using credit cards are advantageous at some point of the time and vice versa. They allure us to utilize them in everyday life. They allow us to stay in the comfort zone and not to venture out. It is better to apply them carefully than to regret at the end of the day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, then, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63868613139 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45747301865 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613138686131 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 12.6551724138 174% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.6417517543 50.4703680194 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.7727272727 104.977214359 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4545454545 20.9669160288 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.31818181818 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0287545476635 0.242375264174 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00899892924577 0.0925447433944 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230249904903 0.071462118173 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.017128634917 0.151781067708 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101113190793 0.0609392437508 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 12.6369458128 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 53.1260098522 143% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.9458128079 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 11.5310837438 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.94827586207 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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