Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that in case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
Some people cannot graduate successfully from university or high school. They, however, can achieve their goals and become winners of life. In my opinion, there are two main factors to reach accomplishment.
First important argument of success is that you have to completely believe in your dream. Realizing point that you want to stand makes more confindent, persisitent and responsible for goals. For example, Jack Ma, one of the world’s lucrative entrepreneurs, failed a key primary school test two times, the middle school test three times and the college entrance exam two times, but he did not give up conversely he continuously considered his ambitions. As a result, he became the richest person in China, which proves that trust yourself is a vital fundamental of achievement.
Second essential reason is effort. “Done is better than perfect” - this quotation reveals secret of creating something best. For instance, Thomas Edison who invented light bulb made thousands of failures to discover ideal one. He said that “ I have not failed. I have just found 10000 ways that won’t work”. Thus if you could use limitless chances to become champion despite the disturbs, you would be rewarded.
To conclude, success is caused by your desire and your attempts. Moreover it does not depend on grades and money or something related to stock.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...aused by your desire and your attempts. Moreover it does not depend on grades and money ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30593607306 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85771393348 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.753424657534 0.561755894193 134% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8061444236 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4666666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146074478806 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394002442571 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518136264515 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079061610889 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503469440978 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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