Some people believe law changes human behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's era, life is changing day by day, this change has changed the behavior of human being also. We have so many rules and regulations to curb the curse from the society but it is very difficult to change tthe human behavior. i partially agree with the notion. Therefore, this essay will delve the both aspectswith taking the example of dowry system before it reaches to an appropriate conclusion. To start with, There are many strict laws in our constitution to stop the dowry system in indian tradition annd customs, however, it still persist in the society due to unchanged human behavior towards women. Although, we become well civilized and well educated but still we follow this custom of marriage because we have so indulged into our old customs and do not want to ignore them. On the flip side, if there will be hard laws against the dowry system the behavior of human being towards this system will definitely be changed. the government should punish them with strict or hard sentense to curb this system from the society. In conclusion, we can say that, the human behavior can be changed by proper law in an effective manner to stop these types of worse system from the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...has changed the behavior of human being also. We have so many rules and regulations ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...ifficult to change tthe human behavior. i partially agree with the notion. Theref...
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Line 1, column 543, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'persists'?
Suggestion: persists
...adition annd customs, however, it still persist in the society due to unchanged human b...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...this system will definitely be changed. the government should punish them with stri...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective manner" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...n behavior can be changed by proper law in an effective manner to stop these types of worse system fro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 1207.87684729 82% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71291866029 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38092009035 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583732057416 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.335680693 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197032656239 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087548658915 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656427032762 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197032656239 0.151781067708 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 53.1260098522 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 55.0591133005 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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