It has been decades since the early popularity of the trend to study abroad. However, it’s undeniably believed that this is still a really commom method for studies, especially in the technology revolution these days. I take my own stance that its benefits would outweigh its drawbacks.
Initially, everyone should bear in mind that the main purpose of this is to improve knowledge in many areas. Going abroad give us chances to approach new things and may be a new life.Thereby, It is all depeding on the country you go, for instance, go to undeveloped country like Laos may lower your life standards but in USA, you deserve more!
Secondly saying, living alone in another land is a good time to train your characters. Above all is your language ability, next is the independence you have and may be also the confidence etc. they should all be developed after a long period of time staying abroad. Furthermore, getting used to another culture would help you delve into it more easily!
Last but not least, you should make the best of every opportunity to make a livelihood, since there would be lots of chances and you know, it’s not as comfortable as you might have thought. Hence, to do further studies or pursue dreams and careers, going abroad is usually the number 1 choice.
Notwithstanding, challenges can defeat most of the students ever studying abroad. It’s about the financial problem, languages or may be they just cannot socialize and be independent!
In brief, most of us have once mentioned the dream of living abroad in life, so why don’t we try our best and follow our hearts. Taking risks and you will receive more!
- Some people believe that the world should use only one language.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- Doing further studies abroad has become increasingly common in recent decades. How might the advantages of studying in other country outweigh the disadvantages. 73
- Some people believe that the government should ban dangerous sporting activities, while others think that people should have the freedom to do whatever sports they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- In your opinion which is more important for success perseverance or good luck 71
- Nowadays more and more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face Is this a positive or negative development 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thereby
...proach new things and may be a new life.Thereby, It is all depeding on the country you ...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ey should all be developed after a long period of time staying abroad. Furthermore, getting us...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...out the financial problem, languages or may be they just cannot socialize and be indep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in brief, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86572438163 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67289672092 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632508833922 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.7870423479 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117756104449 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523387129653 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650751992245 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617649566486 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378051130832 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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