There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Most of the people are of opinion that laws can be categorized into two types as fair and prejudiced and hence one must follow impartial laws and defy those which are biased. On the other hand, there are a few who believe that it is not possible for an individual to decide whether a law is equitable or not. I disagree with the author’s viewpoint to a great extent. My reasons for the same are detailed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, it is impossible for an individual to dichotomize rules and regulations as just or unjust. It depends on human perception as to whether he sees the law as fair or not. For instance, rash driving is injurious to the health of people and hence laws have been made to proscribe them. While a judicious person may consider this logical, a reckless individual may oppose it vehemently. Moreover, laws are also made to protect the weak and poor sections of the society from the tyranny of the opulent and powerful people. If people are allowed to make amendments in the constitution, then there will be a large scale exploitation of the penurious people by the affluent section of society. An apt example of this is law made to eradicate child labour which will lead to the deterioration in the living conditions of children in case it is annulled.
The secondary reason why I fail to connect with the author’s belief is that without the presence of law and order there would be a situation of commotion and chaos across the nation. The violation of any sort of law will encourage the miscreants of the society to perpetrate a crime without any fear of punishment. As for illustration, an individual is required to pay a certain sum of his income as tax for the development of his country. If there are no rules made to reprimand the tax-evaders, then the putative culprit may easily escape the penalty required to be paid to the Income Tax department which will be unequitable to the denizens of the nation who diligently pay their taxes on time. Furthermore, the law and order also ensure that the peace and harmony are maintained in the society by efficiently evading any potential conflict that could happen between different sections of the society.
On the contrary, if the law precludes the growth of any community and has contradicts their moral values and beliefs then such laws should be abolished. However, people should not take matters in their own hand and must approach the judicial system of the nation in order to get the laws amended. The laws which discriminations on the basis of race, colour, caste, gender, status, religion etc. should be revoked in order to maintain equity in the society. The fight for the independence of India is an epitome of such kind of non-cooperation movement where people mustered together in large masses in order to get their freedom from the clutches of the British government.
Thus, to capitulate the discussion, I would like to assert that it should not be under an individual’s volition to follow only those laws which are perceived as impartial by him and ignore others. However, the laws which are detrimental to the morals and values of any section of society must be invalidated by the joint efforts of the government as well as the citizens of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... unjust. It depends on human perception as to whether he sees the law as fair or not. For ins...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the clutches of the British government. Thus, to capitulate the discussion, I wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, thus, well, while, as for, as to, for instance, kind of, sort of, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2721.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 568.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79049295775 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82437334285 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473591549296 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 876.6 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2113633707 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.304347826 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6956521739 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47826086957 5.21951772744 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117606047914 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361774861535 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377378985889 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698627945153 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260601436634 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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